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Thursday, 3 November 2016

WALT: Use descriptive language to add interest

Halloween
In the year 1975 there was a young happy boy who lived in a big old house behind the run down cemetery.

His name was Scott, Scott lived with granny Hilder,she had long black fingernails and short rough gray and white hair. It was a bright but cloudy morning, Scott was getting ready for a long day at school, the day went on and the school bell rang. Scott ran home as fast as he could. He run and pushed through all of the kids,he run through the cows paddocks and through the cemetery into the big old house.
Then he put on his halloween costume,he was  a blood eating werewolf, his eyes were red and he had  dark fur. But now it time to go trick or treating,

1 comment:

  1. Wow Antony! This writing is amazing! I like the way you described Nanny Hilders finger nails. I wonder if they were paru underneath! haha!

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